A First World War story

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By Melchius

Mixed emotions

Ann kissed the fading photograph of Tommy as she always did before leaving the house. It was the only one she had. There wouldn’t be another one now. She stepped out into the half-light of a cold, misty morning as she had for the last twenty years. If there’d been any trees in the neighbourhood she would probably have felt wet leaves beneath her feet. Instead the pavement was clear of vegetation. She looked around. Next door’s solitary pint of milk was on the doorstep. She covered it with a stone so that the birds wouldn’t peck it. The terrace on the other side of the street was just visible. She could see lights flickering behind the net curtains. Other workers were appearing from their neat little houses - women, old men, and children, some only twelve. She pulled her shawl around her shoulders and began the short walk to the factory at the end of the street, her clogs click-clacking on the pavement. She lengthened her stride and caught up with Kitty.

‘Mornin’, Kitty’

‘Mornin’, Ann. Grim day, again. Have you ‘eard about Billy Moran?’

‘Pat told me last night. That’s three sons she’s lost. Poor woman.’


They reached the end of the street but something was different this morning. The hooter was sounding and the gates were open but there was an excitable crowd gathering around a well-dressed, elderly man who had to stand on top of a box to draw attention to himself.

‘Eh look, it’s owd George, he looks in ‘is element up theer.’, said Kitty.

Ann smiled. George Osbaldeston’s voice bellowed from the megaphone.

‘It’s all over. Germany’s surrendered. Factory’s shutting today. I’m giving all o’ you a day’s holiday on full pay. Mind yer back tomorro’, though’

The resulting roar would have drowned out the machines even if they’d been operating but they were as silent as the guns across the channel. Ann looked up into the heavens giving thanks and saw the sky covered with flat caps. The crowd spilled out onto the cobbles. Someone grabbed her left arm, another grabbed her right and together they marched her down the street. Lines of people arm in arm were jigging through the town, celebrating the end of the war.

They passed the catholic church. Ann extricated herself from the throng and slipped in through the small side door. She detected the familiar smell of incense. Looking around she saw an unusually large number of people - others had had the same idea. She stopped at the small side altar and lit a votive candle and then knelt down next to Mrs Moran. The woman looked at her with tears in her eyes as Ann placed a comforting hand on her arm. She thought of Tommy. Consumption had taken him before the war had started. Infant death was common in the town. She bowed her head and prayed ending with an entreaty

‘And please bring him home for Christmas.’

Ann left the church and made her way home. The church bells were ringing, people were dancing and hugging each other. Bunting and flags were being hoisted across the narrow terraced streets. A group passed her carrying a bundle of rags and straw. It looked like a left-over guy from a prewar bonfire night.

‘Come down to t’rec, Ann. We’re having a bonny’, they shouted. We’re goin’ to burn t’Kaiser’.

‘You enjoy yourselves’, she replied.

She felt better than she had for six months ever since that day in April when his call up papers had arrived. He hadn’t volunteered with the younger men at the start of the war. It had seemed like an adventure to them - an escape from the oppressive conditions in the noisy, stifling cotton mills and the squalid, back to back houses they lived in. He was 33 when war had broken out; not a healthy man but even he had been conscripted as the army had begun to run out of volunteers. He’d answered the call without any enthusiasm. She hadn’t wanted him to go but she understood. The alternative - white feathers, prison, shunned by the people he’d grown up with was too much to contemplate. The house had been quiet since he’d gone.

Ann reached her front door and rummaged for her key. She turned it in the lock and the door opened with the usual squeak. That’s his first job when he gets home she thought, smiling to herself. She looked down. There, on the mat, was a telegram.

Comments

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Vinaya Ghimire Level 8 Commenter 3 months ago

You have portrayed the emotions of central character perfectly. The narrative is engaging. But I think you ended your story abruptly.

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Melchius Hub Author 3 months ago

Thanks for the comment Vinaya. Yes I ended it abruptly because the telegram has great significance. During WW1 people who were left at home with their loved ones at war would be informed if their loved one had died by a telegram. Therefore they dreaded a telegram coming. That's probably only clear to people in the UK - sorry. I should think more about a world wide audience. That's a lesson learned.

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BrightMeadow Level 3 Commenter 3 months ago

I am an American and I understood the significance of the telegram. I liked your story very much. I was heartsick for Ann, now looking forward to the future only to be met at the door as she was. Really good story.

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Melchius Hub Author 3 months ago

Thanks for the comment, bright meadow. Glad you liked it.

Jackie 3 months ago

Heart breaking story, the telegram was like slap in the face, which I imagine it would be to the receiver. I liked the ending :)

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Melchius Hub Author 3 months ago

Thanks for reading it, Jackie. I based the story on a great uncle of mine who I came across whilst tracing my family history. He was conscripted in April 1918 at the age of 37, went out to France in september and was dead by the end of the month.

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UnnamedHarald Level 6 Commenter 3 months ago

This story is as good a short story as I've read in a long time. Your attention to selective detail (putting the stone on the milk, the 'accents', etc) without overwhelming us with too much is a hard balance to achieve. As I neared the end, running out of sentences, I wondered whether this was Part 1. The ending was absolutely perfect. I wrote a hub about the last morning of World War 1; there were nearly 11,000 casualties, including nearly 3,500 deaths that morning. Voted up and awesome.

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Rufus rambles Level 3 Commenter 3 months ago

This is a very well written story and very poignant. My great grandfather was wounded in WW1 and his mother received a telegram notifying her of his wounding. Thankfully he survived the war. We managed to find scans of the telegrams online (Australia) and also her frantic requests for more information. They are scanned on my hub if you are interested. Voted up - very good!

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Melchius Hub Author 3 months ago

Thanks for the kind words, Unnamed. I'm glad you liked it. Yes it's quite difficult to get the right balance with the accents. Overdo it and you put people off. I'll definitely look at your hub. WW1 is an interest of mine.

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Melchius Hub Author 3 months ago

Thanks, Rufus. Glad you liked it. I'll have a look at your hub. Both my grandfathers fought in WW1 but I never knew them. According to my parents they both 'worked with horses'. So I was fascinated watching Warhouse a couple of weeks ago.

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